Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Help editing this paragraph?

"Phebe and Silvius relationship is diverse to the Rosalind and Orlando. One way to tell is Phebe isn’t in love with Silvius. Inwhich we know from “Sweet Phoebe, do not scorn me. Do not, Phoebe. Say that you love me not, but say not so. In bitterness.”(3:5 1-3). Phebe hates Silvius and stilldoesn’t lovehim after what Rosalind has said to her. Since, Silvius would do anything for Phebe; she uses him to be the messenger." It sounds weird to me. any help here is appreciated.

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